So, we did this again except we had to use five specific words, each randomised for each person, mine was -
Needle
Gas
Brick
Maximum
Ant
My language features were a hyperbole, metaphor, and alliteration.
Here it is
I was an ant, compared to him. He towered over me, his eye the size of a brick. You could give him a needle, he wouldn’t notice. And he wasn’t even at his maximum height, he still had growing to do. He could swipe us aside like we were a gas. In years to come, I would be retold my own story and I wouldn’t believe them. I took a deep breath and tried to slip behind the group of people, I couldn’t look. He heaved hundreds of huge rocks and moved them aside. He hadn’t yet noticed his audience.
Daaaaaamn Jess. This is really interesting and I wish there was more to enjoy
ReplyDeleteWow Jess. You have a very creative approach to your work. If only we could write more I think your story would have better creativity in what you write.
ReplyDeleteNice Job Jess! What a great way to use 100 words to write such a great story! You have shown how creative you are in this. The use of the three language features was good. Maybe a few more adjectives would have brought it to life. Otherwise, I really liked it.
ReplyDelete- Nadia